英语改错~这样写可以吗?（非得提问规范——!）最起码改的没单词语法错吧!高档点儿的再美化美化撒的~Hello,everyone.Please let me share you a real story happened on me,about English interjection.That was a boring a

英语改错~这样写可以吗?（非得提问规范——!）最起码改的没单词语法错吧!高档点儿的再美化美化撒的~Hello,everyone.Please let me share you a real story happened on me,about English interjection.That was a boring a
英语改错~这样写可以吗?（非得提问规范——!）
最起码改的没单词语法错吧!高档点儿的再美化美化撒的~
Hello,everyone.Please let me share you a real story happened on me,about English interjection.
That was a boring afternon,so i chatted with someone by a chatting site.He was a little boy,i guessed.And though chatting,i knew that he came from one city in Africa.Because most people used English on this site,thus i tried to speak like nature English to the best of my ability.So when i heard that he came from that city,i said "cool".And,yes,this was where something wrong.I just wanted to express my some emotion,like surprise in my original intention.But,just the one word hurted him unwittingly."Are you racial discrimination?"he asked me."NO,Never!"i clarified with a surprised look."Yes,you are.you say cool".At that moment ,i really realized that what i said next would be powerless.Under expected,he gone with full of anger ,i guessed.
Then i reflected on myself,what a mistaken word may bring about?It responsed to be serious.It can hurt someone,or even one race.Maybe we think we are kind on our side,but because of the difference of culture,we may have misunderstanding about foreign lauguage,even an interjection word.
So as a lesson ,we think we should take care of this.When we study foreign language,we should not only learn language,but also necessary to know that culture.

英语改错~这样写可以吗?（非得提问规范——!）最起码改的没单词语法错吧!高档点儿的再美化美化撒的~Hello,everyone.Please let me share you a real story happened on me,about English interjection.That was a boring a
Hello,everyone.Today I'm going to tell you a real story happened to me about English interjection.
(Please let me share这种说法比较奇怪,sth happen to sb不是中文里我们说的发生在我身“上”,不用on)That was a boring afternon,so i communicate with someone by a chatting room.(两次的chat有点重复,chatting room聊天室)He was a little boy,i guessed.And through chatting,i knew that he came from one city in Africa.(through通过,though尽管)Because most people used English in this room,I tried my best to use my English skill.(此句用了两个连词,英语中要么用因为做连词,要么用所以做连词,不像中文可以因为+所以,后半句不够精简,而且用法不正确、意思不明确,因为有很多人在这里说中文,你也不能说得和母语是英语的人一样好,你最多说可以充分地用你学过的英语知识）So when i heard that he came from that city,i said "cool".And,yes,this was where something was wrong.(此句含义不明,且从句中无谓语)I just wanted to express my emotion,like surprise in my original intention.But,just one word hurted him unwittingly."Are you a racial discrimination?"he asked me."NO,Never!"i clarified with a surprised look.(此句含义不明)"Yes,you are.You say cool".At that moment ,i really realized that what i said next would be powerless.Under expected,he left with full of anger ,I guessed.（此句中expect和guess只能用一个）
Then I reflect on myself what a mistaken word may bring about?It could to more serious than what we can imagine.It can hurt someone,or even one race.Maybe we think we are kind on our side,but because of the difference of culture,we may have misunderstanding about foreign lauguage,even an interjection word.
So as a lesson ,we think we should pay attention to this.(take care of是照顾某人的意思)When we study foreign language,we should not only learn language,but also necessary know that culture.（结论奇怪,我们学英语需要了解非洲的文化吗?）

有太多错误，宾语动词

基本上是中式英语 就是传说中的chinelish，语法需要改的地方太多了