帮忙改错英语演讲稿,关于taylor的.Today I want to introduce a singer named Taylor Alison ['ælɪsən] Swift .She is a 21-year-old girl from Pennsylvania [ pensil'veinjə,-niə ] ,America.She is a good -looking girl with

帮忙改错英语演讲稿,关于taylor的.Today I want to introduce a singer named Taylor Alison ['ælɪsən] Swift .She is a 21-year-old girl from Pennsylvania [ pensil'veinjə,-niə ] ,America.She is a good -looking girl with
帮忙改错英语演讲稿,关于taylor的.
Today I want to introduce a singer named Taylor Alison ['ælɪsən] Swift .She is a 21-year-old girl from Pennsylvania [ pensil'veinjə,-niə ] ,America.She is a good -looking girl with long blonde hair and blue eyes.She is a singer and songwriter.
Taylor really loves to sing for people.She began to sing for strangers on the beach when she was only four.She got her first guitar when she was 8 or 9 years

帮忙改错英语演讲稿,关于taylor的.Today I want to introduce a singer named Taylor Alison ['ælɪsən] Swift .She is a 21-year-old girl from Pennsylvania [ pensil'veinjə,-niə ] ,America.She is a good -looking girl with
总体不错,就是结尾不太对头,直接掐掉了的感觉,还有就是句式有点单一.
如果是小学或者初中水平的话,试试我改的这个.希望能帮上你:).
Good morning ,teachers and fellows.I am XXX from class XXX(班级).
Today I want to introduce a pop singer（流行歌手） named Taylor Alison ['ælɪsən] Swift .She is a 21-year-old girl from Pennsylvania [ pensil'veinjə,-niə ] ,America.She is good-looking girl ,and she has long blonde hair and pretty（漂亮的） blue eyes.As a successful singer,she can not only sings beautifully,but also write her own songs.
Taylor is really talented（有天赋的） and she loves to sing for people.She began to sing for strangers on the beach when she was only four.She got her first guitar when she was 8 or 9 years old.Since then,she has been working hard on her music,and until now,she has become famous in many different countries and is loved by numerous（无数的） teenagers（青少年） around the world.

8 or 9years/ 8 or 9 years old. / 8 or 9.

songwriter应该为song-writer,还有8or 9 years old，还有演讲稿太短啊，如果是大学演讲的花有点简单

语法大致没什么错误。
我也很喜欢Taylor Swift.