短文改错tim is one of the firetim is one of the fire fighter in Chicago .he has been a fire fighter for five years and his job ,he does exercise every day to stay stronger ,he is on the duty eight hours a day ,duringhis shift,he eats and sleeps a

短文改错tim is one of the firetim is one of the fire fighter in Chicago .he has been a fire fighter for five years and his job ,he does exercise every day to stay stronger ,he is on the duty eight hours a day ,duringhis shift,he eats and sleeps a
短文改错tim is one of the fire
tim is one of the fire fighter in Chicago .he has been a fire fighter for five years and his job ,he does exercise every day to stay stronger ,he is on the duty eight hours a day ,duringhis shift,he eats and sleeps at the fire house ,so fire fighter have to be ready to answer an alarm at any hour of the day or night ,most of the alarms are from small fires ,they can put out in the time ,the grestest danger came from smoke,sometimes,fire fighters have to enter burned buildings in order to rescue the peopleo outside.

短文改错tim is one of the firetim is one of the fire fighter in Chicago .he has been a fire fighter for five years and his job ,he does exercise every day to stay stronger ,he is on the duty eight hours a day ,duringhis shift,he eats and sleeps a
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Tim is one of the fire (fighter改成fighters) in Chicago.He has been a fire fighter for five years and (加入for) his job,he does exercise every day to stay (stronger改成strong).He is on (去掉the) duty eight hours a day.During his shift,he eats and sleeps at the fire house,(so改成because) fire (fighter改成fighters) have to be ready to answer an alarm at any hour of the day or night.Most of the alarms are (from改成for) small fires.They can (加入be) put out in (去掉the) time,The grestest danger (came改成comes) from smoke.Sometimes,fire fighters have to enter (burned改成burning) buildings in order to rescue the people (outside改成inside).
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Tim is one of the fire fighters in Chicago . he has been a fire fighter for five years and his job ,he does exercises every day to stay stronger , he is on the duty eight hours a day , duringhis shift...

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Tim is one of the fire fighters in Chicago . he has been a fire fighter for five years and his job ,he does exercises every day to stay stronger , he is on the duty eight hours a day , duringhis shift, he eats and sleeps at the fire house ,so fire fighters have to be ready to answer an alarm at any hour of the day or night , most of the alarms are from small fires , they can put out in time , the grestest danger came from smoke, sometimes, fire fighters have to enter burning buildings in order to rescue the peopleo outside.

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