请大家帮我把这篇英语作文改改!急 This semester I write 1500 words report,because I attach great importance to the academic report,and academic report is a challenging for me,so I carefully have to prepare in formal writing before.Then I

请大家帮我把这篇英语作文改改!急 This semester I write 1500 words report,because I attach great importance to the academic report,and academic report is a challenging for me,so I carefully have to prepare in formal writing before.Then I
请大家帮我把这篇英语作文改改!急
This semester I write 1500 words report,because I attach great importance to the academic report,and academic report is a challenging for me,so I carefully have to prepare in formal writing before.Then I will begin to write my report.
First of all I want to fully understand my academic report,I must Search Related information,and detailed record Useful information.I can find related information in the internet and library.
The title of my report is “Computer architecture and Central Processing Unit (CPU)”.Major central processor (CPU) manufacturers are using different design ideas in the world.So the choice of processor will directly determine own computer architecture which will be adopted.Currently on the market structure of the most common mainstream Intel and AMD,respectively determined.
Computer architecture and CPU decision computer performance,from 20th century since the 1970s,because of the extensive use of integrated circuits,CPU become smaller and smaller,but performance better and better.So Computer architecture and CPU is very important.I have chosen this topic and I want to know more about Computer architecture and CPU.
I will write the CPU development and computer construct and CPU relationship.I want to know CPU how to decision computer architecture,CPU how to development in the future.
I will do prepare for this report and efforts to write it well.The important is avoiding plagiarism; I must to pay attention to avoid plagiarism,and believe myself will do well.
这篇作文是如何准备学期末的报告,我要写的是计算机的构建和cpu,主要请大家帮我改改语法,看看有什么错误的,好了还会加分的,
字数要达到250字以上，

请大家帮我把这篇英语作文改改!急 This semester I write 1500 words report,because I attach great importance to the academic report,and academic report is a challenging for me,so I carefully have to prepare in formal writing before.Then I
This semester I will write a 1500-word report, because I attach great importance to the academic report, and the academic report is a challenge for me, so I need to prepare in formal writing before carefully. Then I will begin to write my report.
First of all in order to fully understand my academic report, I must search related information, and record useful information. I can find related information on the internet and in the library.
The title of my report is “Computer architecture and Central Processing Unit (CPU)”. Major central processor (CPU) manufacturers uses different design ideas all over the world. So the choice of the processor will directly determine whose computer architecture which will be adopted. Currently on the market structure of the most common mainstream Intel and AMD, respectively determined.
Computer architecture and CPU decides computer performance, from 20th century to the 1970s, because of the extensive use of integrated circuits, CPUs are becoming smaller and smaller, but the performance is getting better and better. So computer architecture and CPU is very important. I have chosen this topic and I want to know more about computer architecture and CPU.
I will write about the CPU development, computer construct and CPU relationship. I want to know how CPU decides computer architecture, how CPU will develop in the future.
I will do preparation for this report and work hard to write it well. The important thing is to avoid plagiarism; I must pay attention to avoid plagiarism, and believe in myself that I can do well.
这位仁兄,本猫想给你一些建议：找时间补一下英语吧.你介词乱用,分不清词性,还有时态也搞错了.希望你有所收获.

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This semester I write 1500 words report, because I attach great importance to the academic report, and academic report is a challenging for me, so I carefully have to prepare in formal writing before. Then I will begin to write my report.
First of all I want to fully understand my academic report, I must Search Related information, and detailed record Useful information. I can find related information in the internet and library.
The title of my report is “Computer architecture and Central Processing Unit (CPU)”. Major central processor (CPU) manufacturers are using different design ideas in the world. So the choice of processor will directly determine own computer architecture which will be adopted. Currently on the market structure of the most common mainstream Intel and AMD, respectively determined.
Computer architecture and CPU decision computer performance, from 20th century since the 1970s, because of the extensive use of integrated circuits, CPU become smaller and smaller, but performance better and better. So Computer architecture and CPU is very important. I have chosen this topic and I want to know more about Computer architecture and CPU.
I will write the CPU development and computer construct and CPU relationship. I want to know CPU how to decision computer architecture, CPU how to development in the future.
I will do prepare for this report and efforts to write it well. The important is avoiding plagiarism; I must to pay attention to avoid plagiarism, and believe myself will do well.

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