英语短文改错 快,速度｛共十个错误｝I have the greatest job in the world .I travel to unusual place and work alongside with people from all over the world .sometimes working outdoors ,sometimes in a office ,sometimes using scientific eq

英语短文改错 快,速度｛共十个错误｝I have the greatest job in the world .I travel to unusual place and work alongside with people from all over the world .sometimes working outdoors ,sometimes in a office ,sometimes using scientific eq
英语短文改错 快,速度｛共十个错误｝
I have the greatest job in the world .I travel to unusual place and work alongside with people from all over the world .sometimes working outdoors ,sometimes in a office ,sometimes using scientific equipment and sometimes meet local people and tourists ,I am never bored .Although my job is occasionally dangerously ,I don't mind so danger excites me and makes me feel alive .However ,the most important thing about my job is what I help protect ordinary people from one of the most powerful forces on earth －the volcano .I work a volcanologivst .One day I was about to go back to sleep while suddenly my bedroom began to shake ,I immediately realize it was the eruption of the Mount kilauea

英语短文改错 快,速度｛共十个错误｝I have the greatest job in the world .I travel to unusual place and work alongside with people from all over the world .sometimes working outdoors ,sometimes in a office ,sometimes using scientific eq
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I have the greatest job in the world.I travel to unusual (place改成places) and work alongside with people from all over the world.sometimes working outdoors ,sometimes in (a改成an) office ,sometimes using scientific equipment and sometimes (meet改成meeting) local people and tourists ,I am never bored.Although my job is occasionally (dangerously改成dangerous),I don't mind,(so改成because) danger excites me and makes me feel alive.However ,the most important thing about my job is (what改成that) I help protect ordinary people from one of the most powerful forces on earth －the volcano.I work (加入as) a volcanologivst.One day I was about to go back to sleep (while改成when) suddenly my bedroom began to shake,I immediately (realize改成realized) it was the eruption of (去掉the) Mount Kilauea.

I like the English teacher very much.She is a 23-year-old girl 我也做过哎！！！第一个是MY ENGLISH teacher 第二个是whose english name