she won the first prize,while her brother was awarded the second.英语改错

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she won the first prize,while her brother was awarded the second.英语改错

she won the first prize,while her brother was awarded the second.英语改错
she won the first prize,while her brother was awarded the second.英语改错

she won the first prize,while her brother was awarded the second.英语改错
她得到了一等奖,同时她的兄弟被授予二等奖.

是不是那个逗号的问题。
加逗号表示转折,不加是同时,这里应该是同时的意思。

while改为and
she won the first prize,--and--her brother was awarded the second.