第三次重新提问!英语改错题!Dear Evans,I don't know whether you still remembered me or not.I 1_ _ _am Rita,the girl who was used to let you down.It was your 2_ _ _ sweet smile which made me fall in love with English.Now I 3 _ _ _ am a senio

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第三次重新提问!英语改错题!Dear Evans,I don't know whether you still remembered me or not.I 1_ _ _am Rita,the girl who was used to let you down.It was your 2_ _ _ sweet smile which made me fall in love with English.Now I 3 _ _ _ am a senio

第三次重新提问!英语改错题!Dear Evans,I don't know whether you still remembered me or not.I 1_ _ _am Rita,the girl who was used to let you down.It was your 2_ _ _ sweet smile which made me fall in love with English.Now I 3 _ _ _ am a senio
第三次重新提问!英语改错题!
Dear Evans,
I don't know whether you still remembered me or not.I 1_ _ _
am Rita,the girl who was used to let you down.It was your 2_ _ _
sweet smile which made me fall in love with English.Now I 3 _ _ _
am a senior high school student.,English is still my favorite 4 _ _ _
subject.When I was in junior middle school,I like English 5 _ _ _
very much ,and in spite of this ,my English didn't improve a 6 _ _ _
lot .Just When I decided to give it away ,you had a talk with me .7 _ _ _
You said that I should continue working hardly and that I 8 _ _ _
would make a great progress sooner or later .Thanks for your 9 _ _ _
encouragement .Now my English is getting better and better .10 _ _ _
Yours ,
Rita
分数之后追加,只有一处正确,

第三次重新提问!英语改错题!Dear Evans,I don't know whether you still remembered me or not.I 1_ _ _am Rita,the girl who was used to let you down.It was your 2_ _ _ sweet smile which made me fall in love with English.Now I 3 _ _ _ am a senio
1.rememberd改成remember,毕竟是指的现在时
2.be used to letting 或者used to do...这题应该两种改法都可 ,所以或者取掉was,或者把let换成letting
3.sweet smile (that)而不是which,因为这个句式是明显的强调句
4.这个空我不是很有把握,我认为问题出在应该在 English is still...之前加上“and”,因为之前我不知道是不是逗号,如果是的话,那就需要and来做连词,可是楼主你打了一个句号一个逗号.
5.分句后应该是liked ,因为是说的“以前”在初中的时候,过去式
6.in spite of 之前的and应该去掉,因为in spite of本身就是转折加关联的作用,不需要另加连词
7.应该用give up ,表示放弃,而give away是指赠予,分发等等的意思
8.working hard 常用搭配,而且hardly 不表示努力,而是“几乎不”
9.make great progress “a”不应该加,因为这是固定搭配,且progress不可数
10.我认为是对的