请问下面这段英语作文【自己写的,水平有限】有什么错的语法点吗?包括标点.Today,I go to bookstore for buying a book that called How To Improve Your Writing Skill.My writing skill is too terrible.So,I want to improve my wri

请问下面这段英语作文【自己写的,水平有限】有什么错的语法点吗?包括标点.Today,I go to bookstore for buying a book that called How To Improve Your Writing Skill.My writing skill is too terrible.So,I want to improve my wri
请问下面这段英语作文【自己写的,水平有限】有什么错的语法点吗?包括标点.
Today,I go to bookstore for buying a book that called How To Improve Your Writing Skill.My writing skill is too terrible.So,I want to improve my writing skill as soon as quickly.only in this way can I progress rapidly in the future.But still,remembering that we all have difficulties to overcome.I believe that I can do everything what I can.
请问下面这段英语作文有什么错的语法点吗?包括标点.

请问下面这段英语作文【自己写的,水平有限】有什么错的语法点吗?包括标点.Today,I go to bookstore for buying a book that called How To Improve Your Writing Skill.My writing skill is too terrible.So,I want to improve my wri
Today,I went to bookstore to buy a book that called How To Improve Your Writing Skill.My writing skill is too terrible.So I want to improve my writing skill as soon .only in this way can I progress rapidly in the future.But remember that we all have difficulties to overcome.I believe that I can do everything what I want.
稍微给你改了一下,
有些表达还是有点怪怪的不过没有错误,加油!

用法不地道但是还过得去的就不说了
语法错误：
1.as soon as possible
2.另外最后一句成了中国式英语。

Today,I go to bookstore for buying a book that called How To Improve Your Writing Skill.........I believe that I can do everything what《that》 I can.
括号中为更正的，其他的各种不算很严格正式的话是...

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Today,I go to bookstore for buying a book that called How To Improve Your Writing Skill.........I believe that I can do everything what《that》 I can.
括号中为更正的，其他的各种不算很严格正式的话是可以的，作为考试写作也是可以的，如果有朋友说我错了，也请指教哦~ 个人喜欢英语

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这句话I go to bookstore for buying a book that called How To Improve Your Writing Skill.
1.bookstore前面要有冠词，可以是泛指的一间书店a bookstore，也可以是特指的一间书店the bookstore
2. go to the bookstore to do sth./ go to...

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这句话I go to bookstore for buying a book that called How To Improve Your Writing Skill.
1.bookstore前面要有冠词，可以是泛指的一间书店a bookstore，也可以是特指的一间书店the bookstore
2. go to the bookstore to do sth./ go to the bookstore for sth. 前者表示去那里干嘛，后者表示为了什么而去的
3.如果用that引导定语从句，要that is called sth.
也可以直接用过去分词作后置定语 a book called sth.
4. 貌似一般书名里，the这类的冠词,to 这类的词，可以小写
所以那句子可以改成 Today,I go to the bookstore for a book called How to Improve Your Writing Skill.
或者Today,I go to a bookstore to buy a book that is called How to Improve Your Writing Skill.
这句 My writing skill is too terrible.So,I want to improve my writing skill as soon as quickly.
1.前面提到了my writing skill,后面可以用it来代替，看上去简练点
2.直接用so连接两句完整的话使它们变成一个句子也行，My writing skill is too terrible， so I want to improve it.........
另起一句话也行My writing skill is too terrible.So I want to improve .......
虽然so后面加逗号的情况有见过，不过以前我老师说最好不要加，直接so I want to......
3.貌似没有as soon as quickly的，要么就as soon as possible. 要么就 as quickly as possible
这句Only in this way can I progress rapidly in the future.
progress也有动词前进的意思，这句子应该是对的，个人觉得Only in this way can I make progress rapidly in the future. 稍微好一点，毕竟make progress比较常见
这句But still,remembering that we all have difficulties to overcome.I
直接用remember that，用动词原形，就类似于祈使句那样，叫别人做什么
4.这句I believe that I can do everything what I can.
everything 作为先行词，引导词要用that
I believe that I can do everything that I can do.

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