雅思大作文,自己修改了下,走过路过帮忙提下意见,评个分啥的,随便说.These days,it seems quite common that schools arrange students as their academic abilities,and at the same time,there are many particular courses reserved for

雅思大作文,自己修改了下,走过路过帮忙提下意见,评个分啥的,随便说.These days,it seems quite common that schools arrange students as their academic abilities,and at the same time,there are many particular courses reserved for
雅思大作文,自己修改了下,走过路过帮忙提下意见,评个分啥的,随便说.
These days,it seems quite common that schools arrange students as their academic abilities,and at the same time,there are many particular courses reserved for a certain group of students who have other abilities.Yet,there still remains some disagreement as to whether having students with different abilities together is better than grouping students in terms of academic performance or not.Before presenting my view,I intend to discuss both sides of the arguments.
Fist of all,in many cases,students benefit greatly from the method of selecting students according to their academic abilities.From our own study experience,we can find plenty of evidence to support the view that classifying students can positively help motivating their potentials.Ability grouping,actually,makes it possible that teachers can adopt different teaching materials and methods according to different groups .Therefore,children in those classes can receive more specific and useful guidance .Moreover,it is generally believe that selecting students who have similar abilities in one group is beneficial to students’psychological health .Specifically,it can not only prevent the students with highly academic level from being overconfident ,but also make the students with other abilities recognise their value.But at the same time,admittedly,separating students with academic and other abilities may broaden the gap between groups.But overall,I personally believe that the benefits of selecting students depends academic or other abilities far outweigh its drawbacks.
On the other hand,having students with different abilities study together is better to the generation of diversity.Let us imagine a class which consists of students those study well,those artistic genius and those individuals with specially athletic talents.To study in these kinds of classes,it seems that,students can mutually discussing,studying,and improving.But,we have to admit the fact is that our education authorities still select students mainly according to their academic abilities.Because with this kind of arrangement,students with high level of academic abilities can not focus on their studies and the others lack effective guidance .As a matter of fact,it seems only grouping (according to academic and other abilities) can compensate these drawbacks.
In conclusion,I agree that the overall effect of grouping mainly based on academic abilities is positive both in the aspects of knowledge acquisition and psychological development.
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Topic:Some people think that schools should select students according to their academic abilities while others believe that it is better to have students with different abilities study together.Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

雅思大作文,自己修改了下,走过路过帮忙提下意见,评个分啥的,随便说.These days,it seems quite common that schools arrange students as their academic abilities,and at the same time,there are many particular courses reserved for
LS真的不是误导吗?= =
7分我觉得应该达不到,词汇单调,没有复杂的词+很多重复使用的词和短语,首先灵活性和句式多样这点就扣分了.
关于字数,LS说得不太对,250字一定要达到,不然要扣分.然后一般高分（7分以上）是280-300字左右最合适,250字左右的写得好点的一般也就6.5.但是LZ你这样过长（369字）也不太好吧：（1）考试时40分钟真的能完成这么长的大作文吗?小作文可能还会拖一点点时间,最好是看一下自己30分钟能写多长的大作文比较合适 （2）越长你犯的错误就越多
前面写太长,最后一段总结又太短……建议2-3句左右.
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读过的个人感觉：
1.肯定7分的作文拉～
2.条理清晰，用词合适
个人意见：
1.不知道字数有没有超过，一般是240~250字，多余的字一律不算字数（改雅思作文老师说的）
2.conclusion有点弱，虎头蛇尾
3.文中很多it开头的句子，可以试着改为被动句。写作中多用被动句会看起来更学术一点。
比如最后那句 As a matter of ...

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读过的个人感觉：
1.肯定7分的作文拉～
2.条理清晰，用词合适
个人意见：
1.不知道字数有没有超过，一般是240~250字，多余的字一律不算字数（改雅思作文老师说的）
2.conclusion有点弱，虎头蛇尾
3.文中很多it开头的句子，可以试着改为被动句。写作中多用被动句会看起来更学术一点。
比如最后那句 As a matter of fact,it seems only grouping (according to academic and other abilities) can compensate these drawbacks，可以写成as matter of fact, these drawbacks can be compensated by grouping.此处不一定要改，只是举各例子。

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